Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Background With Wendell Berry's "Faustian Economics"

On the eve of my second week at my new apartment, I walked down the now familiar hallway, as usual, my black heels clicking a steady rhythm on the tile floor, past the doors of the apartments of the neighbors I still hadn’t met. People in this building tended to keep to themselves. After I got past the door two doors from mine, I smelt the most unusual smell. It reminded me of being on a farm. I couldn’t figure out why. This made me curious. Putting my scarf over my face, I tiptoed closer and closer to the door. The smell got more overpowering. When I got about two feet away from the door, I noticed that it was slightly ajar. I could see a sliver of light hit my shoes. I pushed the door open, saying, “Hello? Is anyone home? Your door was open and I just thought you should know.” The smell was now so bad that my eyes were watering and I was gasping for air. I ventured further in the mysterious apartment and found, to my surprise and horror, a place that looked like the cave scene from Ali Baba and the Forty Thieves except, exchange treasure for stuff you'd find in your basement or garage. The room contained so many knick knacks that they were stacked on one another so high that they touched the 12 foot ceiling. A large man was laying down in the middle of the room, on top of two king sized beds, and parts of his body still hung off of the ends. The smell, I realized, was the food piled around him. There was a chocolate layer cake on his stomach and pork rinds sprinkled around it. That smell was familiar to me because it smelled exactly like the compost pile my neighbors used to have. The man started to snore. I was relieved he wasn’t dead, and decided to leave. I tiptoed back out of the strange world I had entered, accidentally stepping on pork rinds and necklaces. I wondered if I should've stayed in my old apartment.

6 comments:

  1. I thought this was a really interesting approach, since it was really different from what i wrote. I loved how you allowed the reader to make their own idea up really, but you paint the basics for everyone to fill in the details. It was a not-so-pretty picture you painted for the audience but it really did get your point across. really well written!

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  2. I loved hearing this story in class haha. At first I didn't even think it was true but how could you make all that up. Your story definitely got the message of waste and greed across with the piles of pork rinds and chocolate cake laying all over this huge guy. I could pretty much see the whole thing in my head. I also like the approach you used because my story was totally different from yours. I wrote about chicken lol and its not nearly as interesting.

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  3. I actually love this. When I first heard it read in class I seriously thought it was true. And you idea of what waste and greed is embodies so many of my thoughts on it. You discreet yet keen sense of explaining the words with your vision was exceptional!

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  4. Lol thanks guys :)

    How did you guys approach the question? I'm curious. I didn't even think of doing it another way.

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  5. I still love this little story :) I went about it by describing a single image that came to mind and then elaborating on greed in general. I didn't think of writing it as a story, but I love this! I think it's really impressive that you can think up a little story like this so quickly and have it be so good. If I would've tried writing a story like this in the little time that we had it would've probably been really bad, haha. In addition to all that I think it perfectly describes greed and waste.

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  6. You know how I feel about this story, considering I couldn't control my laughter while trying to read this in class. I never thought that reading about waste and greed could be so funny. My description focused more on the literal meaning of waste like(wasting of resources), and was not as creative. Still amazed by how you were able to write all this in such a short period of time, great job!

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